It was great to see all three comments on my last elevator pitch give me encouraging but also very constructive criticism. All three of them brought up the issue of lack of clarity on how this is going to work. On this elevator pitch I addressed that but explaining briefly how it will actually operate. Indeed that was difficult to do again, in 1 minute but I believe I have tried to summarize it best I could.
Hey Lirim,
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a good idea but i believe this around exist. One can easily go on ebay and exchange books with someone and the range of service is all over the world. Plus, there is a facebook book exchange page where there is no charge. Maybe a business where you can buy books for cheap and resell them on the internet could make decent money.
Hey Lirim, good idea! Maybe next time you record the pitch fluctuate your voice to add emphasis on certain words and gain the audience's attention. I see you have really thought out your plan. Good job keeping the video at just the right amount of time! Check out my pitch at:
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This is a great idea. I know that when classes start I always scramble to find the books I need for cheap and that can be difficult sometimes and inefficient if I order online. I think your first language isn't English, so with that in mind great job! Someone mentioned adding emphasis on some words which I think is a good tip. You can see my blog here: http://collinpd.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html.
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